Monday, 10 November 2014

Storyboard Animatic- 'Staying Alive'

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Finished Animatic by the most adorable team in First Year.


Katie, Dylan, Natasha, Zoe, John, Aidan and Philip

Feedback: 

Janitor's mouth is the wrong shape for a whistling sound effect

Didn't grasp storyline well- Needs extra frames to fill in gaps i.e: Why do the claws need a controller if they seem to have some life about them?

'Fat Alien' could cause the mishap of the claw dropping the body as he dances, as there doesn't seem to be a reason for it to happen.

'Fat alien' is too centre screen.

Scene of an overview, with the janitor struggling in the claw as the other alien dances- more clear narrative.

More of a relationship between the fat alien and janitor.



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